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Thank you very much for your thoughtful amplification.

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Robin Flicker's avatar

I’ve watched this many times since I first watched it before going to sleep last night. It haunted my dreams and all day it’s haunted me. Annoyingly, I lack language for music so can’t name the extraordinary thing that happens in the song but it has to do with the way it begins like a child’s song or story (like “Goodnight Moon”: “In the great green room there was a telephone and a red balloon . . . “). The almost childlike tune (this is where my lack of language for sound is limiting and frustrating) becomes a kind of tick-tock rocking swaying and the words of the poem mirror that, swaying from one thing to its opposite, evoking a dialectic. Here are some examples in which the language enacts and matches the pendulum like motion of one thing then another, something and it’s opposite:

A room like any other/ a room like no other

A burgeoning flame/ a flower

In the joyous/ dead of night

Where he sits asleep/ with his eyes wide open

Dead hands/ revived

So scorned/ adorned

Form/reform

The cross/ and the sword

By the end, it’s as if one has been lulled into a trance, one step then another, until one feels something like a palpitation. It’s so visceral and the images from the film marry with it in an amazing way.

I think it’s an especially hard thing to write about because the power of it is so trancelike.

I didn’t and don’t think I can do justice to the power of the piece but I wanted to try to say something, if only to honor and applaud it. An amazing piece, Patti. Thank you for creating it and for sharing it.

With warmth to all, as ever,

Robin

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